Very good for being made up on the spot, Bunny. But in future, best to keep such poetic masterpieces a bit simpler. Guards are not overly blessed with the intelligence to appreciate your rhyme.
P.S. love the comic so far.
“c-word” — hehehe
“see ya…be ya” — lame
Besides, she still hasn’t gotten her sword back.
“Some people think it it’s funny(…)” I think that first “it” should be a “that”
Everyone’s a critic
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